Star Watch & A Song in the Dark
Dec. 20th, 2009 01:48 pmSilent and bright, the stars watch over
My suffering.
I bring the set for The Two Towers to a close with Sam's point of view as he watches the stars, and then seeks after Frodo in the tower. The first is an echoing pattern that I found very effective for the topic, the second is written with a simple song's rhythm - could use some editing, perhaps and I may eventually go back and rework it.
Star Watch
( The light of EƤrendil glitters )
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A Song in the Dark
( When it all seems ended, with no witness to our tale )
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My suffering.
I bring the set for The Two Towers to a close with Sam's point of view as he watches the stars, and then seeks after Frodo in the tower. The first is an echoing pattern that I found very effective for the topic, the second is written with a simple song's rhythm - could use some editing, perhaps and I may eventually go back and rework it.
Star Watch
( The light of EƤrendil glitters )
-
A Song in the Dark
( When it all seems ended, with no witness to our tale )
-