Seaward & Waves - two for Celebrian
Dec. 22nd, 2009 10:24 pmYour heart was ever seaward, beloved
One for the loss that Elrond faced when his Celebrian, wounded and sorrowed, turned away from him to find her healing over the sea, followed by a shaped 'concrete' poem from Celebrian's view of her longing to escape, more properly formatted the wave-shaped stanzas are smoother.
Seaward
( See how the waves lift their arms to the sun )
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Waves
( This )
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One for the loss that Elrond faced when his Celebrian, wounded and sorrowed, turned away from him to find her healing over the sea, followed by a shaped 'concrete' poem from Celebrian's view of her longing to escape, more properly formatted the wave-shaped stanzas are smoother.
Seaward
( See how the waves lift their arms to the sun )
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Waves
( This )
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